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Old 09-26-2004, 04:18 PM
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Build a Scene

A new idea that I thought we could try. Each time someone posts they can add an action or a line that a character says. Or you can add a character. Let's see if it works

It's a moonlit night full of romance. Enter Josh and Kelly:

Josh: Kelly, I can't believe that all along you were the one for me.
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Old 09-26-2004, 05:00 PM
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*laughs hysterically* Oh man Shari... you just had to use my name, didn't you?

Kelly: I really can't believe it myself... we've been through so much together.

I'm gonna be really bad at this and make it a cheese-fest,
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Old 09-26-2004, 08:12 PM
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Josh: Kelly, I can't believe that all along you were the one for me.
Kelly: I really can't believe it myself... we've been through so much together
[Josh sighs] Josh - When I saw you in the arms of my best friend I thought it was all over for us


I think you're right...it's already quite cheddary
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Old 09-27-2004, 01:30 AM
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Josh: Kelly, I can't believe that all along you were the one for me.
Kelly: I really can't believe it myself... we've been through so much together.
[Josh sighs] Josh: When I saw you in the arms of my best friend, I thought it was all over for us.
Kelly: Josh, that was a mistake. I was angry since I had just seen you with Kate, and neither Elin or Shari were around, so Shane seemed like the only person to turn to.

Whoo, not only did I add a line, but four new characters as well, We should do some sort of flashback sequence,
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Old 09-27-2004, 09:57 AM
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Josh: Kelly, I can't believe that all along you were the one for me.
Kelly: I really can't believe it myself... we've been through so much together.
[Josh sighs] Josh: When I saw you in the arms of my best friend, I thought it was all over for us.
Kelly: Josh, that was a mistake. I was angry since I had just seen you with Kate, and neither Elin or Shari were around, so Shane seemed like the only person to turn to.
Josh: Really?
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Old 09-27-2004, 03:42 PM
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Josh: Kelly, I can't believe that all along you were the one for me.
Kelly: I really can't believe it myself... we've been through so much together.
[Josh sighs] Josh: When I saw you in the arms of my best friend, I thought it was all over for us.
Kelly: Josh, that was a mistake. I was angry since I had just seen you with Kate, and neither Elin or Shari were around, so Shane seemed like the only person to turn to.
Josh: Really?
[A tear trickles down Kelly's cheek]Kelly: Yes. It was never meant to be anyone but you!
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Old 09-27-2004, 03:59 PM
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Josh: Kelly, I can't believe that all along you were the one for me.
Kelly: I really can't believe it myself... we've been through so much together.
[Josh sighs] Josh: When I saw you in the arms of my best friend, I thought it was all over for us.
Kelly: Josh, that was a mistake. I was angry since I had just seen you with Kate, and neither Elin or Shari were around, so Shane seemed like the only person to turn to.
Josh: Really?
[A tear trickles down Kelly's cheek]Kelly: Yes. It was never meant to be anyone but you!
Josh: Please don't cry, Kelly. I trust you.

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Old 09-27-2004, 08:55 PM
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Josh: Kelly, I can't believe that all along you were the one for me.
Kelly: I really can't believe it myself... we've been through so much together.
[Josh sighs] Josh: When I saw you in the arms of my best friend, I thought it was all over for us.
Kelly: Josh, that was a mistake. I was angry since I had just seen you with Kate, and neither Elin or Shari were around, so Shane seemed like the only person to turn to.
Josh: Really?
[A tear trickles down Kelly's cheek]Kelly: Yes. It was never meant to be anyone but you!
Josh: Please don't cry, Kelly. I trust you.
Enter shocked shari: What´s going!
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Old 09-27-2004, 10:19 PM
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Josh: Kelly, I can't believe that all along you were the one for me.
Kelly: I really can't believe it myself... we've been through so much together.
[Josh sighs] Josh: When I saw you in the arms of my best friend, I thought it was all over for us.
Kelly: Josh, that was a mistake. I was angry since I had just seen you with Kate, and neither Elin or Shari were around, so Shane seemed like the only person to turn to.
Josh: Really?
[A tear trickles down Kelly's cheek]Kelly: Yes. It was never meant to be anyone but you!
Josh: Please don't cry, Kelly. I trust you.
Enter shocked shari: What´s going!
Josh: Oh NO!
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Old 09-28-2004, 01:53 AM
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Josh: Kelly, I can't believe that all along you were the one for me.
Kelly: I really can't believe it myself... we've been through so much together.
[Josh sighs] Josh: When I saw you in the arms of my best friend, I thought it was all over for us.
Kelly: Josh, that was a mistake. I was angry since I had just seen you with Kate, and neither Elin or Shari were around, so Shane seemed like the only person to turn to.
Josh: Really?
[A tear trickles down Kelly's cheek]Kelly: Yes. It was never meant to be anyone but you!
Josh: Please don't cry, Kelly. I trust you.
Enter shocked shari: What´s going!
Josh: Oh NO!
Kelly: Josh, it's okay. Shari... we're [Kelly motions between her and Josh] together now.
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Old 09-28-2004, 02:51 AM
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Josh: Kelly, I can't believe that all along you were the one for me.
Kelly: I really can't believe it myself... we've been through so much together.
[Josh sighs] Josh: When I saw you in the arms of my best friend, I thought it was all over for us.
Kelly: Josh, that was a mistake. I was angry since I had just seen you with Kate, and neither Elin or Shari were around, so Shane seemed like the only person to turn to.
Josh: Really?
[A tear trickles down Kelly's cheek]Kelly: Yes. It was never meant to be anyone but you!
Josh: Please don't cry, Kelly. I trust you.
Enter shocked shari: What´s going!
Josh: Oh NO!
Kelly: Josh, it's okay. Shari... we're [Kelly motions between her and Josh] together now.
[Shari gasps]
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Old 09-28-2004, 02:24 PM
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Josh: Kelly, I can't believe that all along you were the one for me.
Kelly: I really can't believe it myself... we've been through so much together.
[Josh sighs] Josh: When I saw you in the arms of my best friend, I thought it was all over for us.
Kelly: Josh, that was a mistake. I was angry since I had just seen you with Kate, and neither Elin or Shari were around, so Shane seemed like the only person to turn to.
Josh: Really?
[A tear trickles down Kelly's cheek]Kelly: Yes. It was never meant to be anyone but you!
Josh: Please don't cry, Kelly. I trust you.
Enter shocked shari: What´s going!
Josh: Oh NO!
Kelly: Josh, it's okay. Shari... we're [Kelly motions between her and Josh] together now.
[Shari gasps]
Josh: Yes it´s true, you deserve the truth
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Old 09-28-2004, 03:22 PM
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Josh: Kelly, I can't believe that all along you were the one for me.
Kelly: I really can't believe it myself... we've been through so much together.
[Josh sighs] Josh: When I saw you in the arms of my best friend, I thought it was all over for us.
Kelly: Josh, that was a mistake. I was angry since I had just seen you with Kate, and neither Elin or Shari were around, so Shane seemed like the only person to turn to.
Josh: Really?
[A tear trickles down Kelly's cheek]Kelly: Yes. It was never meant to be anyone but you!
Josh: Please don't cry, Kelly. I trust you.
Enter shocked shari: What´s going!
Josh: Oh NO!
Kelly: Josh, it's okay. Shari... we're [Kelly motions between her and Josh] together now.
[Shari gasps]
Josh: Yes it´s true, you deserve the truth
Shari: But you have to go back to your planet, Josh!!
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Old 09-28-2004, 07:58 PM
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Josh: Kelly, I can't believe that all along you were the one for me.
Kelly: I really can't believe it myself... we've been through so much together.
[Josh sighs] Josh: When I saw you in the arms of my best friend, I thought it was all over for us.
Kelly: Josh, that was a mistake. I was angry since I had just seen you with Kate, and neither Elin or Shari were around, so Shane seemed like the only person to turn to.
Josh: Really?
[A tear trickles down Kelly's cheek]Kelly: Yes. It was never meant to be anyone but you!
Josh: Please don't cry, Kelly. I trust you.
Enter shocked shari: What´s going!
Josh: Oh NO!
Kelly: Josh, it's okay. Shari... we're [Kelly motions between her and Josh] together now.
[Shari gasps]
Josh: Yes it´s true, you deserve the truth
Shari: But you have to go back to your planet, Josh!!
[Enter Katie ]
Katie: Well, before he goes to his planet. He's going to come and spend time with me and our dog, Thumper. [glare at Josh] We bought a dog together, doesn't that mean anything to you? It's like having the diamond ring on my finger!! [throws water]

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Heh. Gotta add some drama.
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Old 09-29-2004, 03:12 AM
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Oh gosh, ya'll have my laughing too hard to actually produce something of quality, So sorry if this sucks

Josh: Kelly, I can't believe that all along you were the one for me.
Kelly: I really can't believe it myself... we've been through so much together.
[Josh sighs] Josh: When I saw you in the arms of my best friend, I thought it was all over for us.
Kelly: Josh, that was a mistake. I was angry since I had just seen you with Kate, and neither Elin or Shari were around, so Shane seemed like the only person to turn to.
Josh: Really?
[A tear trickles down Kelly's cheek]Kelly: Yes. It was never meant to be anyone but you!
Josh: Please don't cry, Kelly. I trust you.
Enter shocked shari: What´s going!
Josh: Oh NO!
Kelly: Josh, it's okay. Shari... we're [Kelly motions between her and Josh] together now.
[Shari gasps]
Josh: Yes it´s true, you deserve the truth
Shari: But you have to go back to your planet, Josh!!
[Enter Katie ]
Katie: Well, before he goes to his planet. He's going to come and spend time with me and our dog, Thumper. [glare at Josh] We bought a dog together, doesn't that mean anything to you? It's like having the diamond ring on my finger!! [throws water]
Kelly: Whoa, whoa, whoa. First of all, buying a dog does not translate into "always and forever" and secondly, what's this about his planet? He's not from Mars you know, Earth is his home, if not before... well it is now.

Cat fight! Meow!
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